This weeks story inspired by Barry Manilow songs: http://tinyurl.com/y9zumo8 #writers9:45 AM Oct 5th from TweetDeck
@BarbraAnnino North of Havana... 10:11 AM Oct 5th from TweetDecklies a private retreat only a privileged few in the world know about. My friend MANDY and I were going to find it. #writers10:27 AM Oct 5th from TweetDeck @3parfarley There was just one problem...1:29 PM Oct 5th from TwitterBerryThey needed the map and only one person had it. Lucky for us, Mandy knew where he was... at the exclusive COPACABANA Club.9:33 PM Oct 5th from TwitterBerry@BarbraAnnino: But the club didn't allow dogs, so I had to disguise Mandy to sneak her inside.7:41 AM Oct 6th from TweetDeck@lisahanockjasie: IT'S A MIRACLE, the disguise worked.8:47 AM Oct 6th from TweetDeck"LOOKS LIKE WE MADE IT," I whispered to Mandy inside my designer purse. My resemblance to the hotel heiress was uncanny.8:50 AM Oct 6th from TweetDeckThe music was pumping loud which made me a DANCIN' FOOL. 12:12 PM Oct 6th from TweetDeckThe popular song JUMP SHOUT BOOGIE played. It's accompanied with an awkward dance. where everyone freezes, jumps high and shouts "boogie"5:02 PM Oct 6th from TweetDeck@3parfarley: I'm not sure exactly when it was during the song, but that's when things imperceptibly started to slide out of control.5:23 PM Oct 6th from TweetDeckMy MEMORY recalls only one moment: a guy next to me was Jumping with a girl when a burly guy shouted "HEY MAMBO" & sucker punched him.5:36 PM Oct 6th from web@BarbraAnnino: He flew back and before I knew it, the map and that video of me on spring break, went skating across the dance floor.7:15 AM Oct 7th from TweetDeckI showed the map to MANDY, "READ'EM AND WEEP girl! We did it!" We escaped the fighting crowd by dancing our way out to BANDSTAND BOOGIE.7:25 AM Oct 7th from TweetDeckEVEN NOW I can't believe how lucky we were to get the map to the ISLANDS IN THE STREAM so easily.12:48 PM Oct 7th from TweetDeckWe waited until DAYBREAK to begin our journey.10:11 PM Oct 7th from TweetDeck@BarbraAnnino: As the sun shone that morning, the map crumbled, then burst into a rug that floated on air. COULD IT BE MAGIC? I wondered.7:35 AM Oct 8th from TweetDeckWe flew over SHIPS SAILING in a long and winding RIVER and through snowy trees in a WINTER WONDERLAND9:01 AM Oct 8th from TweetDeckI MADE IT THROUGH THE RAIN about 15 hours ago from TweetDeckRT @BarbraAnnino: And just past that, we found it. The lost city of Atlantis.about 15 hours ago from TweetDeckJust then, the rug came out from under us! We came crashing down like a BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER!40 minutes ago from TweetDeckWe fell through the trees and ultimately landed in the OPEN ARMS of a hairy beast.9:34 AM Oct 9th from web@JulianEdward who licked us all over and burped5:22 PM Oct 9th from web"I'M NEVER GONNA GIVE YOU UP," said the beast as he gazed into MANDY's eyes.5:26 PM Oct 9th from web@JulianEdward 'oh you silly monster' she said. 'I only live for 17 days'10:44 AM Oct 10th from webI was diagnosed with the BROOKLYN BLUES. I heard about this place and had to escape. Actually, I had to get away from it all.10:48 AM Oct 10th from webThen Mandy, excited about something she saw, took off down THE LONG AND WINDING ROAD.1:31 PM Oct 10th from webThe beast & I searched until the SILENT NIGHT fell upon us. It was so quiet, only a CARELESS WHISPER could be heard. It was so dark...3:57 PM Oct 10th from TweetDeckIt was so dark, even a WHITE CHRISTMAS wouldn't be possible. AGAISNT ALL ODDS, I had to find my best friend.4:01 PM Oct 10th from TweetDeckThen, I got angry. SOME KIND OF FRIEND! Leaving me here. Alone. On an island with this beast! I could no longer sit RIGHT HERE WAITING4:07 PM Oct 10th from TweetDeckand be LONELY TOGETHER. I was READY TO TAKE A CHANCE AGAIN. SOMEWHERE DOWN THE ROAD my best friend had disappeared.4:10 PM Oct 10th from TweetDeckWe searched 4 days. TIME AFTER TIME, ALL THE TIME. The beast wanted 2 quit, but the beast inside me wouldn't. "I DON'T WANT TO WALK W/O U"4:40 PM Oct 10th from TweetDeckbeast! Help me find MANDY. I don't want to spend my days here without her. I would rather be the WAY WE WERE...poor and surrounded by the4:49 PM Oct 10th from TweetDeckNEW YORK CITY RHYTHMs. It was at this moment, my pity party was cut short by ONE VOICE.4:59 PM Oct 10th from TweetDeckBeast handed me a GIFT OF LOVE. It was Mandy's dog collar and inside the charm was a note. http://pic.gd/95db425:38 PM Oct 10th from TweetDeckWe headed over to PARADISE CAFE. On the way, the beast and I saw a dog with the same collar as Mandy run across the path singing, I WRITE THE SONGSMy destiny dog gave me THE TIME OF MY LIFE and as I sat missing him, the beast said, "YOU'VE GOT A FRIEND" still. He wrapped me up in his big hairy arms and said, "I'M NEVER GONNA GIVE YOU UP because I CAN'T SMILE WITHOUT YOU."
Do you have an alternate more eloquent ending about destiny or friendship. If so, please write it below.
@BarbraAnnino North of Havana... 10:11 AM Oct 5th from TweetDecklies a private retreat only a privileged few in the world know about. My friend MANDY and I were going to find it. #writers10:27 AM Oct 5th from TweetDeck @3parfarley There was just one problem...1:29 PM Oct 5th from TwitterBerryThey needed the map and only one person had it. Lucky for us, Mandy knew where he was... at the exclusive COPACABANA Club.9:33 PM Oct 5th from TwitterBerry@BarbraAnnino: But the club didn't allow dogs, so I had to disguise Mandy to sneak her inside.7:41 AM Oct 6th from TweetDeck@lisahanockjasie: IT'S A MIRACLE, the disguise worked.8:47 AM Oct 6th from TweetDeck"LOOKS LIKE WE MADE IT," I whispered to Mandy inside my designer purse. My resemblance to the hotel heiress was uncanny.8:50 AM Oct 6th from TweetDeckThe music was pumping loud which made me a DANCIN' FOOL. 12:12 PM Oct 6th from TweetDeckThe popular song JUMP SHOUT BOOGIE played. It's accompanied with an awkward dance. where everyone freezes, jumps high and shouts "boogie"5:02 PM Oct 6th from TweetDeck@3parfarley: I'm not sure exactly when it was during the song, but that's when things imperceptibly started to slide out of control.5:23 PM Oct 6th from TweetDeckMy MEMORY recalls only one moment: a guy next to me was Jumping with a girl when a burly guy shouted "HEY MAMBO" & sucker punched him.5:36 PM Oct 6th from web@BarbraAnnino: He flew back and before I knew it, the map and that video of me on spring break, went skating across the dance floor.7:15 AM Oct 7th from TweetDeckI showed the map to MANDY, "READ'EM AND WEEP girl! We did it!" We escaped the fighting crowd by dancing our way out to BANDSTAND BOOGIE.7:25 AM Oct 7th from TweetDeckEVEN NOW I can't believe how lucky we were to get the map to the ISLANDS IN THE STREAM so easily.12:48 PM Oct 7th from TweetDeckWe waited until DAYBREAK to begin our journey.10:11 PM Oct 7th from TweetDeck@BarbraAnnino: As the sun shone that morning, the map crumbled, then burst into a rug that floated on air. COULD IT BE MAGIC? I wondered.7:35 AM Oct 8th from TweetDeckWe flew over SHIPS SAILING in a long and winding RIVER and through snowy trees in a WINTER WONDERLAND9:01 AM Oct 8th from TweetDeckI MADE IT THROUGH THE RAIN about 15 hours ago from TweetDeckRT @BarbraAnnino: And just past that, we found it. The lost city of Atlantis.about 15 hours ago from TweetDeckJust then, the rug came out from under us! We came crashing down like a BRIDGE OVER TROUBLED WATER!40 minutes ago from TweetDeckWe fell through the trees and ultimately landed in the OPEN ARMS of a hairy beast.9:34 AM Oct 9th from web@JulianEdward who licked us all over and burped5:22 PM Oct 9th from web"I'M NEVER GONNA GIVE YOU UP," said the beast as he gazed into MANDY's eyes.5:26 PM Oct 9th from web@JulianEdward 'oh you silly monster' she said. 'I only live for 17 days'10:44 AM Oct 10th from webI was diagnosed with the BROOKLYN BLUES. I heard about this place and had to escape. Actually, I had to get away from it all.10:48 AM Oct 10th from webThen Mandy, excited about something she saw, took off down THE LONG AND WINDING ROAD.1:31 PM Oct 10th from webThe beast & I searched until the SILENT NIGHT fell upon us. It was so quiet, only a CARELESS WHISPER could be heard. It was so dark...3:57 PM Oct 10th from TweetDeckIt was so dark, even a WHITE CHRISTMAS wouldn't be possible. AGAISNT ALL ODDS, I had to find my best friend.4:01 PM Oct 10th from TweetDeckThen, I got angry. SOME KIND OF FRIEND! Leaving me here. Alone. On an island with this beast! I could no longer sit RIGHT HERE WAITING4:07 PM Oct 10th from TweetDeckand be LONELY TOGETHER. I was READY TO TAKE A CHANCE AGAIN. SOMEWHERE DOWN THE ROAD my best friend had disappeared.4:10 PM Oct 10th from TweetDeckWe searched 4 days. TIME AFTER TIME, ALL THE TIME. The beast wanted 2 quit, but the beast inside me wouldn't. "I DON'T WANT TO WALK W/O U"4:40 PM Oct 10th from TweetDeckbeast! Help me find MANDY. I don't want to spend my days here without her. I would rather be the WAY WE WERE...poor and surrounded by the4:49 PM Oct 10th from TweetDeckNEW YORK CITY RHYTHMs. It was at this moment, my pity party was cut short by ONE VOICE.4:59 PM Oct 10th from TweetDeckBeast handed me a GIFT OF LOVE. It was Mandy's dog collar and inside the charm was a note. http://pic.gd/95db425:38 PM Oct 10th from TweetDeckWe headed over to PARADISE CAFE. On the way, the beast and I saw a dog with the same collar as Mandy run across the path singing, I WRITE THE SONGSMy destiny dog gave me THE TIME OF MY LIFE and as I sat missing him, the beast said, "YOU'VE GOT A FRIEND" still. He wrapped me up in his big hairy arms and said, "I'M NEVER GONNA GIVE YOU UP because I CAN'T SMILE WITHOUT YOU."
Do you have an alternate more eloquent ending about destiny or friendship. If so, please write it below.
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This was such a fun story to write. A lot of collaborators this week. Thanks BarbaraAnnino for supplying the first words and making this storyexperiment work. You threw me off at first introducing the dog. Also JulianEdward with the monster living for 17 days. That is what this experiment and collaborating is all about. Thanks
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